17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S7SXMfU3xsI
I definitely started my last pitch video out with saying my name and how I would be talking about my product. This time I was able to be more engaging, having an attention grabber that would make listeners want to stop and wonder if they have been in that situation and what I would say next in terms of a solution. I also felt like I rambled a lot less and was able be concise when getting to my point.
I definitely started my last pitch video out with saying my name and how I would be talking about my product. This time I was able to be more engaging, having an attention grabber that would make listeners want to stop and wonder if they have been in that situation and what I would say next in terms of a solution. I also felt like I rambled a lot less and was able be concise when getting to my point.
Hi Sara;
ReplyDeleteI believe you did a great job on your second elevator pitch. I can understand your product in the 1 minute and 16 seconds you speak. It is also great that you were able to make changes in your second pitch according to the feedback you got from your first one. Indeed, I did not hear you ramble and think your elevator pitch was very concise when getting to your point. For the future, keep in the right direction. Go Gators!
Hi Sara, you did a great job on your second pitch. I am really impressed at how much better the pitches flow than the first ones that we completed. You look much more confident and enthusiastic and you do an exceptional job of explaining your product. You are very animated in your presentation to where I could imagine the cup there in your hands.
ReplyDeleteHi Sara, the pitch itself was very good. Your content is great and so was the pace and tone of your voice. There are definitely some things you can improve on that are secondary. You should focus on wearing something more professional than a T-Shirt. Also you should change the setting. Doing a pitch from a bathroom does not give off a sense of professionalism. As long as you get that sorted out, I feel you have a very strong pitch on your hands.
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